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:iconalexanderhenderson:
Here is the first rendered pass of an animation I worked on a while back that I'm prepping for a demo reel. I figured I'd post it for feedback.

Malcolm character courtesy of AnimSchool.com

The dialogue clip is from The Big Bang Theory.
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Dude this is awesome!!
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*AlexanderHenderson Feb 8, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks :)
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Mood: Joy !ThruWolfysEyes Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Super expressive! That was awesome, and it flowed pretty nicely! Loved it! +watch. :3
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*AlexanderHenderson Feb 3, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it :)
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~Hnilmik Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I'm not really an animator, but I will say that there are aspects here and there that look a bit strange to me, like how the motions are slower compared to the quick, attacking words. Like with "dammit George", usually I'd commend the smoothness of the head turn and the likes, but in this case, I feel a more snappy turn of the head would more effectively drive home the anger/"puncturing" quality of the profanity. Since I'm more than aware that animation is a laborious endeavor, and reanimating everything would probably be too much trouble, perhaps there should be more follow through with the actions accompanying words that sounds like they're being said in CAPS? In example, I really like how his head was married with the rest of his body in the very last "SHELDON!!"

@@; Anyhow, I wish I was an animator to better articulate what feels off about this, but hopefully speaking up at all will get some gears turning for actual animators to fill the blanks! Especially since I feel as though this clip is going somewhere...!
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*AlexanderHenderson Jan 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks for the critique, I'll go back into the file and see if I can fix some of those things.
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~DarkMonkey40 Jan 13, 2013  Student Filmographer
That is good, that's....hilarious. Good work.
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*AlexanderHenderson Jan 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank you very much :)
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